#100418 - On that extremely petty note, a short note on advancement - plot is important, but while your readers may be excitable, they’re not stupid. It’s no fun if your leading character has every advantage in the world at the start of the story and has no challenge getting the partner(s) he wants, especially when the majority of the mannerisms of the partners are the exact same, ESPECIALLY especially if these characters submit to the main protagonist out of principle for no reason other than a weird power fantasy that has no real plot *cough mypenname3000 cough*. This seems more Herculean a task than in actuality - ‘girl has sex with boy 1 in chapter 1 and boy 2 in chapter two’ is technically a plot.
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